Disappear

by Onoitsmandie   May 4, 2007


Don't hold me close
Let me go
I'll disappear
Nice and slow

Don't be there
Acutualy u never were
I'll disappear
Time to go

Give me back
My razorblades
I'll disappaer
Under these cuts and scrapes

Give it up
theres nothing you can do
I'll disappear
Because of you

*i started typing and this is what i came up with tell me what you think*

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  • 17 years ago

    by MicHaEL iS SaVinG ThE DaY

    Nice poem. Its good. And if you ever feel that way or something i'll be glad to help.=]

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Great job. Very emotional & powerful poem. I have felt this so many times - you're not alone. :]

    "Give me back
    My razorblades
    I'll disappaer
    Under these cuts and scrapes"

    ^ My favorite stanza. Wonderful job, keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

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