Comments : Choke

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    WAA!!!

    short yet so amazing..
    all i can say is ....>WOW<..

    loved it
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Short but straight to the point this is really good... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess

    Ive been there b4 i realli like it 5/5 =]]

  • 17 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    Strong very strong

    -love whitney-

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Jup, short but strong!

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Sadly, i can relate to this.
    i've written tons of poems about it.
    it's not a lovely thing at all blech :p

    anyway 5/5 love.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem very sad ,but true, love your writing and your style , great penned poem good job, keep up the good work , your friend Tracy 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Genna

    Breath Taking