Cool never seen this style before... I like it when people try thease differnt types.. and the poem has a beautiful message =)

I learned those type of poems in class yours is very well written great job

love erin

Cute. :D Good job.
One thing: " till I am" < would sound better as until I'm.
Other than that you did a wonderful job with this. Cute, short, sweet. Love it. :D
5/5

Cute poem hun

This is a very good poem, it a pretty cool style, i got to try it and u did good, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Im not quite familiar with this style but i liked it :) it's like after every line there's a pause and it gives much more impact than simply writing it straight... good job, well thought out :)

~angel~

I never seen this style before, but i like it, very creative.

This was a great little piece of poetry you have written here. Short but expressive nd so sweet. Loved the form and style. Well done on this i think it deserves a 5/5 in my eyes~mel

Wow!!...it's a beautiful poem!
Very well written!...very sweet poem!
Love it!
Tk care!
xxPoojaxx

The funny thing is me and a friend were just talking about this style of poetry. very nice
keep it up

Short and sweet 5/5 hunny!!!

Aw its like a quote but I Like it.. I can't do this kind of poem lol. anyway great poem! good choice of words! well done :)

Good job on your formed poem.
Take Care Cindy

Wow so short yet still so powerful. I loved it. And its true I think that everyone has some sort of love in their heart always no matter what, its just weather they are able to share it with anyone else that matters. Nice work, so simple and eligant(sp?) especially with the strict layout that you went with. nice job.

I really like this style. i cant say that i recognize it too well but it is very unique and i really like the message so keep it up

Great reverse oddquain =) I "Love" it

Cute :D I think it would do better as a quote though, but it is still great :D a powerful meaning!

Cute poem. There's not that much to comment on, because it's quite short. It didn't make me think, "Wow, that's amazing!" but you managed to effectively put the message across, which is what we look for in a poem.

Nicely done.

Awesome job!! It is short and sweet and to the point, but powerful. It has such meaning crammed into few words. Flow and word choice and everything rocks. 5/5 for sure!!!

Much Love,
.:Danielle;l.

'till' = 'til

Other than that one mistake I'm pretty sure it was perfect. Syllable count was just right, and the flow was pretty good.
Overall you did an amazing job, hun.
Keep it up!