This is another great poem cindy, i think there may be an error in the last sentence, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

Cindy,

Wow - O - Wow.
This poem was very strong & full of powerful emotions. The flow was flawless, the word usage was great, and the descriptions were wonderful.

"When you look that way
It always makes me cry
Don't Know where it comes from
All that hatred in your eyes"

^ My favorite stanza. As always, wonderful job Cindy. :] Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

So its back.
I still could feel the same intensity and those emotions which which need a shoulder and i wish again...if i could be there.

Great write my friend

all the best and take care

Great poem!

How sad....well written and emotional....Hope you have brighter days ahead!

This is quite distressing to read. I had been badly treated and misundestood by the ones I dearly loved, specially my so-called friends. And this piece reminded me of them... I hope everything is fine with you though. Take care. Love, Debbie

This broke my heart Cindy because my dad treats my mom that way...all she wants is to be loved and respected and they barely hug or talk..hes never home ...its horrible..I hate the fact that so many human beings are out there feeling this way and what a crappy way to live life....makes me sad...however you came out with a great poem!!
Well done,
Chelsey

Beautiful wording cindy, no surprise coming from such a lovely lady as yourself, i loved your last stanza, it really sings out to me. well done gurl! xox sam

This was really sad and a shame that some people are like this. Just remember that you have many friends here who really care about you.
Take care.

How sad but beautiful.

"Giving freely of myself
Have always loved you
With everything I am
Seems hard for you to do"

Once again, another outstanding piece from you Cin.
It's so hard when someone you love so much seems to reject that love and treats you like dirt on the bottom of their show.. this piece speaks volumes to so many people..
5/5
*Gem*

Beautifully penned. i like it. 5/5
love willow oxo

Loved this poem,it was so sad...I know how you feel because I used to be treated this way....only I was the one who ended up with hatred in my eyes...you have wonderful poems,even though most are so sad.

Yes, i liked this one. again your words are very moving.

in this one i liked the way you created the side of the 2 characters, one with hatrid and shoing no love, and yet the other wanting the love and showing the love and getting nothing in return except confusion.

you also mentioned ... "Not what I wanted
Dreamed for better things"
this is sad because i think a lot of people will read this and relate to it, thinking of what they had planned for their lives etc.

but on the other hand i think it might be an eye opener for those people who do not plan or want to achieve anything, and could possibly help motivate them into doing something with themselves.

It had a good flow and was an enjoyable read.

well done, 5/5 x