Amazing.
I can relate to this one so much. It's what I want - I want just ANYONE to help me or even just sit and try to understand.
The flow was flawless, your word usage was great, and the emotions were powerful... & the message was wonderful.

"Will someone be able to change
These emotions, feelings I feel?
It hurts my heart, hurts my soul
This is a call for help, an appeal

Searching for a knight in armor
It doesn't matter the size, shape
Save me from thoughts, pessimism
Say nothing at all, just be my escape"

^ Fabulous job! Keep writing. 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Yep, sry. The "it" was supposed to be "in". Hehe, whoops.

Ohh this isn't eck at all!
The word choice was beautiful, the imagery creates vivid pictures and the rhyme scheme is enjoyable.
The flow is flawless throughout, and I found the ending to be hardhitting and intense.

Wow. that was astonshing. The flow was flawless, the word choice was well thought out, and brilliantly placed, the emtions were strong, clear, and raw. You did an excellent job, this is one of the best poem i have ever read by you. I wouldn't change a thing.

Just a couple things.. um in this line:
"Mind feels tired, body fells abused"

is it really suppose to be "fells" or feels?

and in:
"Yet these thoughts has just begun"

"has" is suppose to be "have"

that's just about it... a couple of minor errors that i just noticed... no biggie... aside from it your poem was good... well done... i love the last stanza :)

~angel~

I actaully really liked it, not much to leave for critique deary :) i can relate so u got me there too lol keep it up, i cant wait to read your other poem

Hey!Beautiful poem!....Loved it!!....Kp up de good wrk!
xxPoojaxx

Well done write.
You had great use of words.
Very deep and powerful.
Flow was beautiful.
I coudln't find not one thing wrong.
God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)

Oh, i liked the thoughts that persipired from this one. made me visualize jolts of memories. sort of like bitter nostalgia.

I wrote this for the same contest, but yours is ten million times better, in fact i think you're going on my favs, oh that doesn't happen easily

No doubt about it, its a wonderful poem. such imagery your word choice is amazing, just, just a great poem.

I liked that, i don't think it's eck! ^^

This is awesome amazing, wow! your a great writter. Its not 'eck' its amazing well done. I love all your work you have some real talent keep it up!!

This one is soooo neat i love reading ur poems great job hun!

Loved this part

Depression we will feel once again
Out comes the body's glorious rain

And that's all I have to say. =)

Good job!

Very sad ad heart touching write. The sadness can be felt in the words you have penned.

Will someone be able to change
These emotions, feelings I feel?
It hurts my heart, hurts my soul
This is a call for help, an appeal

Searching for a knight in armor
It doesn't matter the size, shape
Save me from thoughts, pessimism
Say nothing at all, just be my escape

These two stanzas say so much. Great job!
Take Care Cindy

And again! another beautiful poem! good choice of words! the flow was flawless! beautifully penned! The emotions was raw. Well done! 5/5 as always :)

I like the idea of this poem a lot.. although its been done before.. the flow was great except for in this line "This is a call for help, an appeal" which created an ejoyable read.. the word choice was good.. not fantastic i think you could have described your feelings with a little more detial.. but its just an opinion :D