Puppy Love (Triolet)

by Jenni Marie   May 4, 2007


A poor dog stands alone
He will die soon, no doubt
He has no place to call home
A poor dog stands alone
Wishing the RSPCA were on the phone
Bones are showing, his hair falling out
A poor dog stands alone
He will die soon, no doubt.

Triolet-Consists of 8lines.
The 1st 4th and 7th line repeat
The 2nd and 8th line repeat as well
The rhyme scheme is abaaabab

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Awww....that was heartbreaking.
    I have this huge sensitive spot for animals so this one hit me hard. You have mastered a triolet quite wonderfully. Keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    Wow..you really know alot about writng and poetry. I never knew what a a triolet was until now. this was a very very good peice though. shows pletny of emotion and is so true becuase this is basically the story of many peoples ( or in this case animals) lives
    i luved it

    5/5
    luv,
    ~Shannon~

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Thats kinda sad,, and sick lol. Nicley written tho [[=
    Carissa

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