Thats kinda sad,, and sick lol. Nicley written tho [[=
Carissa

Wow..you really know alot about writng and poetry. I never knew what a a triolet was until now. this was a very very good peice though. shows pletny of emotion and is so true becuase this is basically the story of many peoples ( or in this case animals) lives
i luved it

5/5
luv,
~Shannon~

Awww....that was heartbreaking.
I have this huge sensitive spot for animals so this one hit me hard. You have mastered a triolet quite wonderfully. Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.