Lost

by xXLost in the Nightmare of LifeXx   May 4, 2007


I'm lost,
Lost in this deep blue sea.
Fishes all around me.
All different kinds.
Rainbow fish and angel fish,
Just swimming around me.
Then it goes black.
A light turns on.
The sounds of exotic birds reach my ears.
I'm lost.
Lost in this deep green amazon.
Birds and plant life surround me.
Closing in.
Circling.
It goes black.
White light blinds me.
I'm lost.
Lost in this neverending white arctic.
Polar Bears and sea lions around me.
Vicous.
The cold temperature bites against my uncovered skin.
It goes black.
And I am lost,
Lost in this nothingness.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cooper

    Haven't read anything of yours in a long time. This isn't one of my favourites, but definitely worth the read. Very descriptive and well written, like always.

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Overall, it was pretty good, I like the idea, and the message it has, but the flow is a little off!! I really like it though!! Good job!! 4/5!!

    Much Love Darling,
    .:Danielle:.

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