by silence May 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
You told me to trust you |
by Roxy
Awwww!! Last stanza was amazing. |
by Wallace
Excellent poem superbly done. It was a joy to read from start to finish, love it, keep it up. |
by Just Lucy
Awwww Ashlie!! you really do have a way with words, how you can just write about the events that have happened and still make me smile in the end, even in a sad poem, your just sooo positive!! |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Great ending.....puts a smile on ones face. I like how you write, whatever happens you always right about it and it always has great flow and rhythmn and goes well together. Keep writing!! 5/5 |
by firexdancer
This made me smile at the end ashlie, you use your poems to say exactly what you want to say and say it perfectly. this is so sweet, 5/5 i hope your doing good. |