Love and Negotiation

by dollwithafrown   May 4, 2007


Sitting in the park on that beautiful day,
Spending time patiently talking away,
About all the good things, about all the bad;
All the formations the relationship had.

Right from the beginning, love was the key;
It opened their eyes and made their hearts see.
Since that special moment, a bond was formed,
And from then on 'till now, their spirits have warmed.

A little negotiation, gets them through the weeks.
They answer questions that the other one seeks.
Talking about marriage, a future ahead of time,
Yet knowing that true love, doesn't come without a climb.

Love and negotiation, an answer to their prayers;
Nothing to worry about; conflict, affairs.
Communication equals relationship success.
All that's left to do is go onwards and progress.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    So powrful words and great explanations
    And you had sucha great way to bond these two things together
    I liked especially those,

    Love and negotiation, an answer to their prayers;
    Nothing to worry about; conflict, affairs.
    Communication equals relationship success.
    All that's left to do is go onwards and progress.

    Good work,
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    I don't know if anybody has ever told you this, but you are wise beyond your years. You write with such passion. It's beautiful.

    Note: "Right form the beginning"
    Might wanna fix the "form" to "from".

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I totaly agree with you that love is the key, so true yet sometime love is the reason of all of the stress and the problams in our life,
    you are truly an amazing writer.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I enjoyed this poem alot, i found it to have great vocab which was held strong throughout the whole thing. Great flow and impressive story line. Well done~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Noel

    I like this. It's kinda cool how it talks about how love doesn't come without work. It's something that's hard but worth it.

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