I like this. It's kinda cool how it talks about how love doesn't come without work. It's something that's hard but worth it.

I enjoyed this poem alot, i found it to have great vocab which was held strong throughout the whole thing. Great flow and impressive story line. Well done~mel

I totaly agree with you that love is the key, so true yet sometime love is the reason of all of the stress and the problams in our life,
you are truly an amazing writer.

I don't know if anybody has ever told you this, but you are wise beyond your years. You write with such passion. It's beautiful.

Note: "Right form the beginning"
Might wanna fix the "form" to "from".

Josie

So powrful words and great explanations
And you had sucha great way to bond these two things together
I liked especially those,

Love and negotiation, an answer to their prayers;
Nothing to worry about; conflict, affairs.
Communication equals relationship success.
All that's left to do is go onwards and progress.

Good work,
Laura