I really like this poem. It shows your love through another source. Allowing the reader to visilize whats goining on.

Excellent love poem!!...very beautifully penned! it sure shows Emotions!...lovely poem filled wth beauty!...
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Definately ur best work...another 5/5...=D
the flow is especially nice.....fast and smooth..
the repition helped enhance it..good work...keep it up...

Hey nice job! Itz a simply beautiful poem! It gives a clear image of what is going on.......keep it up.....hope to read another one of your poems soon.........

Just keep up your nice wordings and I am with you....

Short and simple, great poem! ^,^ I really liked it 5/5 go you! XD haha