Comments : Surrounded By Stars.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    It is a powerful message being told in that last stanza. I liked this poem even though I must agree that the last stanza is confusing. All in all 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh my.. that was simply amazing! I like this 2 lines:

    The girl with too many dreams.
    has learned how to hide.

    A very powerful poem! keep it up! I enjoyed reading this one :) well penned! good job!