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by Kurt
It is a powerful message being told in that last stanza. I liked this poem even though I must agree that the last stanza is confusing. All in all 5/5.
by Marc Ortiz
Oh my.. that was simply amazing! I like this 2 lines: The girl with too many dreams. has learned how to hide. A very powerful poem! keep it up! I enjoyed reading this one :) well penned! good job!