Black Rose.

by Melly   May 4, 2007


I feel so lifeless,
Like a black rose
Nobody bothers with me
No one cares to know.

They all walk past me
Point and just stare
Can you not see my pain
The pain in which I can longer bare.

Why won't you help me?
Am I too lost to be save?
How long will this go on for?
How long must I wait?

I feel so dead
Even though I'm half alive
Can't get it straight
And can no longer do this thing called life.

I can't pretend anymore
The pain, it's slowly killing me
I can't breath anymore
Please, please, don't leave.

Don't let me shrivel up and die
Don't let my wither like a black rose
Falling of the edge of my mind
And no one cares to know.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    One can feel alot of painful emotions coming from the words, this is very well written and captures so many feelings. Well done.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandy

    Wow. this is a really great poem.
    Don't let me shrivel up and die
    Don't let my wither like a black rose
    Falling off the edge of my mind
    And no one cares to know.
    I LOVE THAT PART!! you really are a great writer!! cant wait to read more!!

    <33Mandy

  • 17 years ago

    by YoU-nEvEr-NeW

    Wow that was amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem the emotions were surly felt , beautifully written great job, I loved it, ~5/%~ your friend Tracy

  • 17 years ago

    by AnimeGothFreak

    Great poem! You captured the emotions beautifully!

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