Great poem! You captured the emotions beautifully!

Great poem the emotions were surly felt , beautifully written great job, I loved it, ~5/%~ your friend Tracy

Wow that was amazing!

Wow. this is a really great poem.
Don't let me shrivel up and die
Don't let my wither like a black rose
Falling off the edge of my mind
And no one cares to know.
I LOVE THAT PART!! you really are a great writer!! cant wait to read more!!

<33Mandy

One can feel alot of painful emotions coming from the words, this is very well written and captures so many feelings. Well done.

Regards,

Steve