Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh my...I frikken LOVE this!
So much depth and emotion and pain and yet written so beautifully and elegantly.
The flow is good throughout, the imagery used was beautifully done and I was gripped throughout the poem.

Very well done. YOu did a great job.
The flow was a little shaky but that's
okay. I would say more, but I"m
so tired. Sorry. God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^__^)