Comments : Her pale snow skin..

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This has a few spelling errors but other than thatits a fantastic poem. its really well written and i like your detail.
    glance in her eyes
    you might see her past
    thats the bit that touched me most.
    well done xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kate

    Well thanks! :) i rili appreciate it.