Where's, what's my home?

by linda   May 4, 2007


It was here next to me
was it a human being?
no,i don't think so
was it a heart breaker?
yeah it was
why did this heartbreaker leave me alone?
why did he leave my tears on my cheeks?
will u come back someday and wipe them away?
or shall i call god to let the rain fall
so that i could wash away all my tears!?
please come back to your home it's broken
come back,fix it,put it inside your heart
never let it out!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Excellent, i know people who feel this way but can never express it. the fact that you put it into words is amazing!!
    :):)

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    The rhetorical questions really kept me engaged and I loved this piece. Word choice is great and grief is clear in this piece. If I was that boy, I would really come back and fix it!

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by 2AStarOfEfinity

    This poem was very good, i like your writting style.

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