Amazing!
I really wasn't expecting the ending - a nice little surprise. The flow was flawless, the word usage was good, & the emotions were strong. Also, the imagery was so vivid - I could see everything in my mind.

"roses are beautiful,
but their poison is strong,
a web of black blood,
that catches your song."

^ My favorite stanza. You're a wonderful writer, keep it up! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Amazing poem. Realistic but yet not all the way still leaves room for the imagination. Great job.

Roses are beautiful,
but their poison is strong,
a web of black blood,
that catches your song."

wow so much power, perfectly written, excellent flow, brillant show of emtions, and amazing word choice. It spoke to my soul and painted many vivd pictures in my mind, 5/5

The title of this poem was god, i liked the way you used fairly simple vocab in this one. As the roses are red theme is fairly simple anyway. I loved it hun

xxx alex xxx

This poem was very well written. It has a very catchy title. Keep up the good work!

I don't like few lines in this one but rest of this piece is great. Metaphors that you used are excellent and it is very deep. It has goo message, I enjoy reading it.