This is such a nice poem, keep it up

This is a amazing poem i love the way you started every line with when though sometimes i got mixed up on what line i was on lol but good job

keenan
ps could you maybe check out my new poem red paint??

Now that was gr8,, i loved it

When you have to change your View
When Words can fly and cut like Knifes

really like those 2 lines
and the last two lines brang tearz 2 mi eyez
vry touching
great work
.x

This is a very intresting poem. i havent yet read a poem thats in this fassion. but i like it alot. the way u was tryin to get a point across was really neat. 5/5

Awww this is such a beautiful poem.. it sounds more like a friendship poem..

I like the repetition of WHEN throughout the entire poem.. it was really interesting to read because as I was reading I was wondering what the ending was going to be like..

and you ended it perfectly.

Amazing job once again. You are very talented. 5/5 =)