Dead rose petals

by Willow   May 4, 2007


Cover me in dead rose petals,
For I was once that blooming rose.
But now I am the dead petal,
That will no longer grow.

Close the lid upon the lace,
In which I now lay.
Watch that lace disappear,
As everyone begins to pray.

Feed me to the burning fire,
In which I will forever dance.
I will burn with no regrets,
As the fire swallow me with every prance.

Throw my remains to the wind,
And watch them twirl and whirl.
I am now this curious wind,
Who loves to spin and swirl.

Through you dreams, I shall run,
Trailing lace as I go.
Leaving behind faint memories,
Of the smile I shall never show.

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  • 17 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing poem.. i think its perfect hte way it is.. it makes sense to me.. u wrote with so much intensity and a way for ppl to understand the point u want to get across. i lvoed it!! keep up the amazing writing
    take care
    luve angie

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This is a real good poem you have captured death in a kind of absobant way.

    a little advice..

    Feed me to the burning fire,
    In which I will forever dance.
    I will burn with no regrets,
    And let the fire swallow me with every prance,

    The last line is too long, urm lets see how abouttttttt..

    Allow the fire to swallow my every prance,

  • 17 years ago

    by manic moments

    I dont know what your talking about... it makes perfect sense! yeesh, dont fuss its good

    keep going, you need more poems up

    lots of lvoe ♥♥♥

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