I dont know what your talking about... it makes perfect sense! yeesh, dont fuss its good

keep going, you need more poems up

lots of lvoe ♥♥♥

This is a real good poem you have captured death in a kind of absobant way.

a little advice..

Feed me to the burning fire,
In which I will forever dance.
I will burn with no regrets,
And let the fire swallow me with every prance,

The last line is too long, urm lets see how abouttttttt..

Allow the fire to swallow my every prance,

Amazing poem.. i think its perfect hte way it is.. it makes sense to me.. u wrote with so much intensity and a way for ppl to understand the point u want to get across. i lvoed it!! keep up the amazing writing
take care
luve angie