by Chad Picard May 5, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Wolves and lambs come to play |
by Vanessa
The message was clear, and the flow was perfect until the end, but that was diffrent and again diffrent is good. well done. 5/5 |
Beautiful poem. I'm still amazed I inspired that. I really loved it, it flowed nicely. I'd give it a 10 out of 10 |
It's ok.... i really liked your choice in wording though. a sheep and a lamb are the same....so im not sure where you were going...maybe i just didnt grasp the concept lol |