It's ok.... i really liked your choice in wording though. a sheep and a lamb are the same....so im not sure where you were going...maybe i just didnt grasp the concept lol

Beautiful poem. I'm still amazed I inspired that. I really loved it, it flowed nicely. I'd give it a 10 out of 10

The message was clear, and the flow was perfect until the end, but that was diffrent and again diffrent is good. well done. 5/5