by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG May 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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Smiling with composure she sat back, |
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I really like this one. Had me sitting here with a smile but yet tears welling up in my eyes. |
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I couldn't really get much emotion from it and didn't really know what was going on. But such a great way with words. 5/5 |
by Bryan
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This is an excellent poem jenna, a few mishaps in it, loved the flow, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!! |