This is an excellent poem jenna, a few mishaps in it, loved the flow, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up!!!!

I couldn't really get much emotion from it and didn't really know what was going on. But such a great way with words. 5/5

I really like this one. Had me sitting here with a smile but yet tears welling up in my eyes.

Lovely.. 5/5

Josie