Naw this is sad. the flow was great and that helped this along and dig a deeper hurt and pain.

the heading yes was good. i loved it all. yet so sad. but great write on this.

5/5 David

Wow, this was a very sad, yet beautiful poem. Andrea does have lovely titles! I really wish I could finish the poems I chose titles for!! Anyways, well done! I liked the little spoof at the bottom, seemed like a narratorish type thing to say, also helped make sense of the poem, for those who didn't understand the meaning!