Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Dont worry life will get better. you'll get a true friend and its going to be awesome and dont think your pathetic cuz your not... i dont even know you and i still think your not pathetic so dont worry

Great poem!....well penned!......very touching too..good wrk!..kp writing!
again a 5/5 :-)

xxPoojaxx

Touching, something most of us can relate to. You did an excellent job on expressing your true feelings so i have to give you 5/5

Nicely penned, it was a great read, and it was touching and heartfelt, 5/5

Hmm very sad poem, expressed well and interesting. It was an enjoyable read and gives a bit of insight into the mind of the writer. wonderful 5/5

The flow and wording was very off at times, but the emotion was beautiful and many people can relate to this. 5/5 Very well done.

I love the kind of poems that aren't about structure or rhyme scheme. they're just about life. they're blunt truth and it's refreshing. good poem.
also, cheer up. life gets better.
5/5