Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

"saying forever but meaning never"

What your trying to say in this poem, I completely agree with. Forever is just a 7 letter word, its beginning to lose its meaning. So much is changing in this fast life we live in. If only we could fix the world. Great write, really enjoyed reading this poem!

take care
Makaveli

So true, so true