by Brittany C May 5, 2007
category :
Special events /
other poems
I see you standing there across the dance floor. |
by Kitten
Aww such a sweat happy poem truley wonderfully written |
Not too bad. Interesting message...I just don't like the flow and how it was more of a story, rather than a poem. Also, never be afraid of punctuation. =] |
by Vanessa
Well written. I liked this is was kind of sweet. Keep upo the good work and again thaks fro sharing. |
Beautiful poem!..i loved it!...very well written! |
by Gem
There's quite a few typo's that need fixing but apart from that, a beautiful little poem |