Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep it up. Chek out some of my poems, when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

There's quite a few typo's that need fixing but apart from that, a beautiful little poem
Some wonderful imagery m'dear
5/5
*Gem*

Beautiful poem!..i loved it!...very well written!
a 5/5 frm me!
xxPoojaxx

Well written. I liked this is was kind of sweet. Keep upo the good work and again thaks fro sharing.

Not too bad. Interesting message...I just don't like the flow and how it was more of a story, rather than a poem. Also, never be afraid of punctuation. =]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

Aww such a sweat happy poem truley wonderfully written