In the End

by Brittney Follett   May 5, 2007


Baby, I don't know what to do...
I'm sorry that I broke your heart.
Watching you bleed from inside,
Is just ripping me apart.

I tried to let you down easy.
Hurting you; last thing in my mind.
Baby, I don't think it will work.
I can no longer put the pain behind.

I'm sorry you still love me...
But you just got to let go.
I think I still have feelings,
That you can never know.

Baby, I'm tired of crying.
You're the source of my tears.
I'm crying right now darlin'
Quietly so no one hears.

I just wish you could understand
We can't go out anymore.
I'm sorry to tell you this...
I feel like such a wh0re.

Four months and seven days.
That is how long we held on.
It's the End and looking back
I realized: I loved you Jon.

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  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That poem was more than just words, there was actually emotions there that I could sort of feel (I say sort of because Ive never actually truly felt them for myself yet....only through people's poems). It flowed wonderfully. I also like how the end seemed to sum it all up. (its my pet peeve to read a great poem that has a terrible ending.) Great Job, Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    That was pretty good. I know the feeling I have bben there. Sounds if you should be alone for the right reasons, instead of with someone for the wrong ones. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

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