Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

That was pretty good. I know the feeling I have bben there. Sounds if you should be alone for the right reasons, instead of with someone for the wrong ones. 4/5

That poem was more than just words, there was actually emotions there that I could sort of feel (I say sort of because Ive never actually truly felt them for myself yet....only through people's poems). It flowed wonderfully. I also like how the end seemed to sum it all up. (its my pet peeve to read a great poem that has a terrible ending.) Great Job, Keep it up.