I love when people write poems about family/friends, its so sweet! I liked this, very descriptive [[=
Carissa

Aww, mashaAllah this is such an amazing poem. I really loved this, it was a great write, may Allah bless you too. =)

Ever since I read your poems I loved them! That was when I had the name Naydeen, dont know if you remember, but anyways I loved the first part of this, its was excellent. Very well written, great flow, overall great. 5/5

Awww very beautiful poem:)....I love the way this flowed...May allah give you blessings for this amazing peice!! walaikumsalam:)
Definetly 5/5!