by Run out of words May 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In the narrow, dark, passage, |
Absolutely breathtaking. Don't even know what to say. |
=) 5/5 |
Lovely! |
by CarolRae
Wow....that was awesome....really really much very awesome...i think this would be an excellant piece to submit to that competition you mentioned....good job, great write...it's very emotional, and, the way you use your imagination and mind to travel to that world and write something about it is awesome..... |
Wow, I love this poem. It is written amazingly. Keep up the great work at writing 5/5 |