Fallin apart

by Bettina   May 5, 2007


Standing there with my arms wide open
Standing there with my tears running down
Standing there with my heart so broken
Standing there with my dreams lost around
Standing there with my soul so empty
Standing there with my hopes for your love to putt them together again
Standing there with my illusions torn apart and this endless pain

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bettina

    Hey, guys 10x for the comments. Im happy u liked it. Im actually not posting anything here to see if it has any poetic value or so but just to share it with ppl. So if u enjoyed reading it thats the most important n not if it was well written. Im sticking to the content rather than the shape as long as it sounds good and makes sense its ok. Besides, mind that Im not an english native speaker so excuse me if my words are simple or anything....

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Nice poem, the repitition was nice, the flow was good, although the enidng could have been more creative, but it was ok, so good job.

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