Broken Heart

by moonlil   May 5, 2007


I wish I would have been with you this day
and hold your hand while you faded away.

I would have whispered in your ear
that I love you so deeply my dear.

I would have lain besides you tight
all day and night.

I would have watched you sleep
and kiss you on your cheek.

I would have wiped away all your tears
and take away your fears.

I would have told you to fight
cause you are my light.

I would have taken away all your sorrow
if I knew there would be no tomorrow.

But now it's too late
maybe it was fate.

It tore us apart
and caused a broken heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by GemmaR

    I really liked your poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Fantasic rhyming it really flowed wonderfully, great piece xox lithium

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    That was a very heartbreaking poem , reach touched ,brings tears to my eyes ,i really enjoyed reading it, great job, 5/5 your friend Tracy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I would have taken away all your sorrow
    if I knew there would be no tomorrow. "

    That couplet spoke volumes..
    We have to treat each day as if there was no tomorrow, its never to late to tell someone you love them and to make them feel loved..
    This poem was so heartbreaking, yet beautiful at showing the emotion..
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very heartfelt poem. Great job!

    I would have taken away all your sorrow
    if I knew there would be no tomorrow.

    These lines really touched my heart.
    Take Care Cindy

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