Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep it up. Chek out some of my poems, when you have the time.

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Wallace

Wow, beautiful poem. I like the repition in the beginning and the end it flows really well! I liked the poem on the whole as well:P so I can't really choose a favorite part...

I liked this poem. there is a suddle message hidden within it. and i enjoyed reading it and trying to figure out what ti was. good work

I love it.
I love the way you structured it.
The emotion was shows and the imagery was great.
Keep it up hun 5/5

[Sarah]

I like the repetition in this poem! very effective! well done! a great poem! keep it up!

This peom really got me, you desribed your feeling into words oh so well> kepp it up i look forward to reading more of your writing

Wow... this poem really captured my attention.... i can feel the emotion coming through from it... great job. i love the structure and the repetition of lines works with this one. i love it. and thank you for the comment

Wow, this poem is written amazingly. And is very strong. Keep up the great work. 5/5
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