Friend

by Yvonne   May 5, 2007


Life is not as bad as you think
When you have friends to help you along the way
If they are good
They will take your hand
And lead you in the right direction
They will be there when you need them most
They will never let you down
If you are sad
They will be there
If you are hurt
They will come to your aid
Just don't let them down when they need you
You need to be there when they are down
You need to catch them when they fall
Having friends does not only help you
It helps your friends too
Make sure you are a good friend
And your friends will be good friends for you

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  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Whoa! Thats awesome! I loved it....its a great description of a true friend....and a great description of you! hehe, great job! Your poems always flow so well, keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Hehe, I liked the poem and it'smeaning. What you were trying to portray I can totally relate to however I have to agree with Kelsea too. It doesn't exactly rhyme, it's more of really meaningful words put together...:) Either way, I loved the meaning, and how you showed waht you think a friend is. It's quite hard to find such a perfect friend, and you describe it so well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    Its very true...but it doesn't seem to flow...
    I will have to say 4/5 for a vote, as it just seems a bit...I don't know...off to read. It doesn't really come into my mind as a poem. But, it has a good message. That always gets a fairly high vote from me.
    <3 K

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep it up. Chek out some of my poems, when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

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