Comments : Friend

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep it up. Chek out some of my poems, when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    Its very true...but it doesn't seem to flow...
    I will have to say 4/5 for a vote, as it just seems a bit...I don't know...off to read. It doesn't really come into my mind as a poem. But, it has a good message. That always gets a fairly high vote from me.
    <3 K

  • 17 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Hehe, I liked the poem and it'smeaning. What you were trying to portray I can totally relate to however I have to agree with Kelsea too. It doesn't exactly rhyme, it's more of really meaningful words put together...:) Either way, I loved the meaning, and how you showed waht you think a friend is. It's quite hard to find such a perfect friend, and you describe it so well.

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Whoa! Thats awesome! I loved it....its a great description of a true friend....and a great description of you! hehe, great job! Your poems always flow so well, keep it up!