by XxWorthlessxX May 5, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Every morning she wakes up, |
by SheenaMarie
Short and strong...great write |
by Sora
A truley great poem indeed. |
by Empathy
I thought this poem was very well done for what it's length was, your emotions are strong as well as your message and I never had any trouble with it's fluency. Nice work. |
Very emotional....full of pain and sadness...but the rhyme made a great flow to it...great write!! |
by Chazeh
Very touching xx |