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by Mollie May 5, 2007 category : Life, society / other
Anger scream my name as I know you always do and deliver me from this pain explain the harmful truth my mind has broken down from the life I seem to live I feel empty and run down however crying is a sin no ones there anymore and to whom would understand I've lost all of my control I need some place to land anger scream my name again I'm feeling something there when every feeling goes away you seem to hold my hand.
by Sydney
That was good : ) Emotions were good and it came together quite nicely. Nice job : ]
by Vanessa
Nice flow, well penned, excellent word choice. the emtions were clear, and the message strong. You did a great job 4/5