This waas a real sweet poem it flowed and read very well. The story was well rounded a 5 if I must say so good job.

WOW, I loved the poems imagery, the words were superb :P, its a really sweet poem, it had a great flow too, it's very descriptive, I can't think of anything wrong with it off of the top of my head, great job :D 5/5

The imagery you invoke in this poem reminds me of countless days on the beach and bonfires at night with all my friends! Great poem, I loved the words and the flow..it was excellent!

Kaila its great!!! haha I LOVED IT!! its so cute!! *voted for it for the weekly poetry contest*

Luv Lucy

Very sweet poem...perfect imagery portrayed through out and it flowed well too...and the well chosen words added beauty to the poem
xxPoojaxx

That was so sweet i really like it..thankx for commenting mine, i have to add you to my favorites for this one! Keep it up

Wonderful write and a very enjoyable read.. you describe the summer setting and romance so nicely.. i love how you throw in the simple things like playing volley ball and putting on a sweatshirt signifiying nighttime because it gets chilly .. the flow was great and overall this is a simple but excellent poem..

"Bump, set, spike, I do with ease."
i think you meant to say "i do [it] with ease"

You did this one well, i thought it flowed well, the emotion was good, and imagery was okay.
it wasnt your best but anyhoiw i still loved it!

Your writting is ful of emotion i love that.. you are very talented i love you work keep it up

Your 2nd best poem. I still like the last one I read. That one was amazing. Still, 5/5.

Very nice! Love It!

Ah
So beautiful
i really liked it
good job
5/5
:~)Sam Mayo

Another one of your beautiful poems. You did a good job at explaining every feeling. I loved it. 5/5

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