Wow, excellent, usually people have a hard time with making Acrostics flow, you seemed not to have a problem. Excellent write, I enjoyed it. The flow was flawless and I loved your choice of words. Great Job. |
by Melpomene
Ok, I know it took me some time to comment on your poems sorry! been busy. This was a beautiful acrostic poem that i really loved. I enjoyed your word choice it made the emotion strong and easy to read. Flawless poem you have here.Well done~mel |
Hey, |
Beautiful choice of words thanks for your comment on "pick pocket" |
by Spaz
This is lovely....keep up the good work! |
by Alma
Your words were beautiful and they captured the beauty and essence of a rose so well |
by isabel
The roses can be perfect but your poem is as perfect as they are... |
by snoweyes
Thank you for your comment! |
by k i k i
Thanks for the comment :] |
by Crystal Gaze
Your peice holds the truth beautifully. I really enjoyed it. So Captivating, so touching, So.. perfect. |