Now you know.......

by hollyxxmariee2011   May 6, 2007


In these eyes
More than words
More than anything that I've spoken
As the skies turned to gray
My heart's just about to crack open
So the story goes
Theres something you should know
Before I walk away
and I blow the ending

I never wanna be without you
Oh no, here I go
Now you know
What I feel about you
there's no running
I must have been wrong to doubt you
Oh no
There I go
No control
And Im fallen
So now you know

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    There is a line or two in this poem that i dont think quite fits in with the rest, your structure and rhymes are good, but not great. A lil more work and i think this could be great. Your terminology is excellent and you have a way of connecting the reader to your emotions, a hard thing to do and you did it well. -IBE

  • 17 years ago

    by LiNa

    I feel this way right now and this poem just cheered me up 100% its so simple but means so much u know. i loved it though. 5/5 for sure.

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