by LiNa
I feel this way right now and this poem just cheered me up 100% its so simple but means so much u know. i loved it though. 5/5 for sure. |
by Love Panda
There is a line or two in this poem that i dont think quite fits in with the rest, your structure and rhymes are good, but not great. A lil more work and i think this could be great. Your terminology is excellent and you have a way of connecting the reader to your emotions, a hard thing to do and you did it well. -IBE |