Never Ending Dream

by aDORKable x3   May 6, 2007


I'm stuck inside the heartache,
The tears stream down my face.
I'm mapping out my life with a pen -
Where mistakes can't be erased.

You're pulling at my heartstrings,
My heart's broken in two-
You ripped it out and smashed it,
With a simple "I love you."

You may find this surprising,
But, in you, I don't trust.
We built a bridge between us-
Based on lies and rust.

Never again will I love you;
You've lied and cut me deep.
But no matter what I do,
You will not see me weep.

I'm stronger than this,
It's something you've never seen-
I'm rousing myself awake;
Awake from this Never Ending Dream.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I loved this,
    But in the line..
    "I'm mapping put my life with a pen- "
    put should be out, and a space
    between pen and the dash,
    would make it look a little neater.
    And in this line,
    "You may find this suprising,"
    suprising should be surprising,
    and in...
    "Based on lies and rust."
    rust is trust? Unless it's supposed to be trust
    which would make a lot more sense
    with this poem, haha.
    Anyways, I loved this poem Dear,
    5.5

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