All Three

by Goran Rahim   May 6, 2007


My heart is so perplexed
Between the three girls I love.
Since all of them are nice,
Choosing just one is so tough.

I cannot let go of any of them,
They all love me and same here.
But I just have one heart,
How can they all share?

Someone tried to help me out,
From this confusion to set me free.
Advised me "ask the heart to choose one"
When I did, the heart responded "all three"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Lol What a dilemma! Why not go out with all three?!? lol It could be fun, just as long as the three never found out, eh? Very cute and funny. I loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Hmm, this was okay. It's not your best piece, though. I'm not really one for funny poetry.

    "My heart is so perplexed
    Between the three girls I love.
    Since all of them are nice,
    Choosing just one is so tough."

    ^ I just thought this stanza seemed a little rough. It just didn't flow well.

    I liked the ending, however!

    Nice try, it's just not your best. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Hahaha awesome poem! It's hard to find a quality funny poem, but you have a really humorous one here that is written very well! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Lol I like the last line hahaha! I can relate to this poem lol.

    I cannot let go of any of them,
    They all love me and same here.
    But I just have one heart,
    How can they all share?

    I love this stanza! :)

    By the way this poem made me smile! good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I dont really like this one that much because the meaning of this poem doesnt really make sense to me