Lol nice poem Goran. Short, and to the point. I enjoyed the read. As always it had a great flow and rhyme. |
by Melpomene
Lol i liked the last line it was great. This poem was quite cute and quite funny mixed together. Flow was nice. Well done with this~mel |
by David
Oh i loved this poem. it was so full of love too. it was excellent. i enjoyed the ending the most. when your heart replied with all three. it was a great ending to a superb poem. |
by shela
I hope I am not one of them, or else? you know it. |
by Mousie
Lol well that would be a dilemma now wouldn't it? good luck with that one, i'm confident you'll make the right decision, you're strong enough to make it. just listen deep down to what your heart tells you, trust me, somewhere it's whispering only one name, you just have to listen harder. great poem goran, as always, no matter what genre. 5/5 for the greatest poet on earth. |
by Avan Ahmad
Hmm interesting poem. In all your poems you talk about one girl but now its three. Nice! dast xosh |
by Vanessa
That was good, it actually made me laugh. As always great job. 5/5 |
by AlaSkA
A three way tie is never fun. i cant do that with multiples, get hemmed up with it. and loose them all. the line, they all love me and same here, could use some work. just doenst sound like your usual word choice. other than that man, good poem. |
Loved this poem....Beautiful ending!... |
The flow ruined the poem, rather, lack thereof. I liked the poem, and it is obviously well written, but it just didn't hit me as hard as a poem with a flawless flow would have. I tried to think of ways you could fix the flow, but my mind seems to be on writing mode, not in editing mode right now. All the same, still a very well written poem. Good job. |
Hey, |
by Lonesomeme
Great job...I think that this poem really was close to home for me because I have recently been battling this same thing in which I care for several different women but I am not sure which is the best chosen for me....5/5 Best wishes |
by Kelsea
This poem made me smile. It is well written, and it has a great flow. The word choice is nice too. Good jobs |
I dont really like this one that much because the meaning of this poem doesnt really make sense to me |
by Marc Ortiz
Lol I like the last line hahaha! I can relate to this poem lol. |
Hahaha awesome poem! It's hard to find a quality funny poem, but you have a really humorous one here that is written very well! 5/5 |
Hmm, this was okay. It's not your best piece, though. I'm not really one for funny poetry. |
by Bugg
Lol What a dilemma! Why not go out with all three?!? lol It could be fun, just as long as the three never found out, eh? Very cute and funny. I loved it. |