My suicide

by Valiantpenguin   May 6, 2007


We've given in to the temptation
and it makes the hole in my chest burn more
knowing i cant have you
just makes me fall to the floor
I'm crying in my agony
wishing i was dead
i wish you weren't with her
its pulling me apart thread by thread
i know she'll never see
but i guess you wont either
the love thats truly there
that would keep us together
so I'll take my blade
and run it down my wrist
it'll be my final day
to think, breathe, or live
i know that you wont care
and when I'm dead neither will I
i just wish you'd feel something
at least you could cry
but i know its too much to ask
so i wont say a word
but i will say something in my mind
i love you dear boy, good bye world

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  • 17 years ago

    by just me

    This is awfully sad honey but it was indeed very well written and a very nice poem.
    i likes it.
    <3
    L.C

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This poem, is dark and troubling. I know the feeling. The word choice was great, and the emtions were clear, and strong. Powerful write. 5/5

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